Okay, This is a section from my story, and I'd like you to tell me what could happen next. Here we go:
“Well, after my divorce, I’ve been lonely. Except for the school kids, but I didn’t feel like I was actually talking. Connecting. You know what I mean?” Annette nodded. After her father’s death, it was hard for her to connect to the world. To anything that was dead, or alive. At school she walked the halls like a ghost, public wasn’t somewhere she went anymore. “Been there, done that.” She smiled. Mr. Ackley gave a sympathy smile.
So, what do you think she sould say/do or he should say/do?
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